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Post by foxshadow on Feb 28, 2009 16:48:51 GMT -5
Name:Foxshadow Gender:She-cat Age:15moons Desired Rank:Warrior Desired Clan:Any clan that may need me. Physical Description:A dustyred she-cat.She has crystal blue eyes.She has black paws and a fluffy tail.She is kinda short with a long tail. She has a riped ear. She has a few battle scars. She strong legs good for swimming too. Her fur is short. Her ears are a normal size. Personality: She is nice and funny.She is a good fighter and a great leader.Foxshadow can jump from happiness to sadness easly.She sometimes pushes her self for what she belives in.But out of all of that she is cranky in the morning*who isnt?* She takes care of her clan. Foxshadow can get upset alot. At times she will be offensive. This cat is emotional. Character's Past: Foxshadow has lived in the cln all her life. Her mother died right after Foxshadow was born.Her mother's name was Smokebird. Her father is still alive his name is Sabortooth>A gray tom.Foxshadow lived her life as a loyal cat every one looked up to and trusted.Her apperintece name is now Forestpelt a great warrior.Her leader died of white cough. Foxshadow is now a great warrior. Her mentor was Frosttail. He died in a battle with dogs. Foxshadow is still learnig and teaching. She works hard for her clan. Notes:Foxshadow has no mate.She has no brothers or sisters.
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Post by Shadeflight on Mar 3, 2009 21:38:36 GMT -5
You'll need more description on pretty much all of the main categories, meaning Personality/Description/Past :\
Edit: They're still too short. :\ There has to be at least one descriptive paragraph in the categories that really describes the character to give us an idea of what they're like.
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